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Post by xraycat on Sept 6, 2006 20:57:41 GMT -5
Then why are you backing up Wilber on this? im not backing up anyone fiind one anti baker comment from me in this thread |
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Post by mond34 on Sept 6, 2006 20:58:36 GMT -5
answer my question kris
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Post by xraycat on Sept 6, 2006 21:00:11 GMT -5
By what, being stupid posting all these worthless posts. So, let me guess, you earned a Gm spot too right? Look, A-lew, somethings get annoying. I like you as a person, and we get alot, but comeon you and Wilber little "thing" with Baker is just getting freaking annoying! wooo i love that one where you match the cards kris play that one its a toughie Dude, you need some hooked on phonics if you ever want to be a professional sports writer. |
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Post by Kris Johnson on Sept 6, 2006 21:17:31 GMT -5
When the hell did I say I wanted to be a Professional Sports Writer? I said I want to be a freakin Sports Agent. And what in that sentence or paragraph besides not using 's on the end of Wilber's username is wrong.
The commas, and everything else is done correctly. I put it on Spell Check on my computer.
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Post by xraycat on Sept 6, 2006 21:19:25 GMT -5
use the card one man its great fun.
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Post by watchthis on Sept 6, 2006 21:26:35 GMT -5
When the hell did I say I wanted to be a Professional Sports Writer? I said I want to be a freakin Sports Agent. And what in that sentence or paragraph besides not using 's on the end of Wilber's username is wrong. The commas, and everything else is done correctly. I put it on Spell Check on my computer. Okay, here it goes: First you should of had a question mark after posts, not a period. Second you should of not had a comma after so. Third you should of put sometimes, not somethings. Fourth you should of had come on, not comeon. Fifth you should of had apostrophe s after Wilber. |
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Post by Da Bearfan on Sept 6, 2006 21:27:55 GMT -5
Wilber, stop trying to get on Owens's nerves. I know that AYL is just joking around, but you're actually trying to get him in trouble again.
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Post by xraycat on Sept 6, 2006 21:28:58 GMT -5
Wilber, stop trying to get on Owens's nerves. I know that AYL is just joking around, but you're actually trying to get him in trouble again. no im always serious game face baby  |
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Post by Kris Johnson on Sept 6, 2006 21:53:02 GMT -5
The Card one, what are you talking about?
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Post by Kris Johnson on Sept 6, 2006 21:58:58 GMT -5
When the hell did I say I wanted to be a Professional Sports Writer? I said I want to be a freakin Sports Agent. And what in that sentence or paragraph besides not using 's on the end of Wilber's username is wrong. The commas, and everything else is done correctly. I put it on Spell Check on my computer. Okay, here it goes: First you should of had a question mark after posts, not a period. Second you should of not had a comma after so. Third you should of put sometimes, not somethings. Fourth you should of had come on, not comeon. Fifth you should of had apostrophe s after Wilber. Yes, you do put a comma after so in many situations. Those situations would include the very beginning of a sentence. And, typing is about 10x different then on paper. On computer I try to get all of my typing done fast. On paper, I am very good with my english. So, yeah. Now what. haha |
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Post by Lil' Mans a PIMP on Sept 6, 2006 22:11:07 GMT -5
Okay, here it goes: First you should of had a question mark after posts, not a period. Second you should of not had a comma after so. Third you should of put sometimes, not somethings. Fourth you should of had come on, not comeon. Fifth you should of had apostrophe s after Wilber. Yes, you do put a comma after so in many situations. Those situations would include the very beginning of a sentence. And, typing is about 10x different then on paper. On computer I try to get all of my typing done fast. On paper, I am very good with my english. So, yeah. Now what. haha Kris watch this is right. |
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Post by Kris Johnson on Sept 6, 2006 22:40:57 GMT -5
Yeah, I know he is. Exept the so part. But, I don't care how my english looks unless I am doing a blog on Sportingnews.
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Post by xfl2001fan on Sept 11, 2006 13:29:39 GMT -5
Yes, you do put a comma after so in many situations. Those situations would include the very beginning of a sentence. And, typing is about 10x different then on paper. On computer I try to get all of my typing done fast. On paper, I am very good with my english. So, yeah. Now what. haha Kris watch this is right. Watch is not entirely right. The comma after "So" is there because there is a break in the normal sentence structure. If you look at the context of the sentence, and you remove the items that are between the two commas, it is still a complete sentence. This is why he is able to place the comma after the So. I haven't taken an English class in over a decade, so I can't remember the exact term for that phrase-break...but that's essentially what it is. The third "Correction" is actually incorrect. I believe he was trying to say some things (with a space between the two words) and not sometimes. If he corrected it to the "corrected" version, then it would still be wrong. It would then be an incomplete sentence. The reason for that is (again) the "phrase-break" where he placed A-lew between commas. If you remove A-lew's name, then it becomes an incomplete sentence. However, if you put a space between the two, it is still a complete sentence. If you are going to pick apart someone's work, please do so properly. Explain why you think the corrections are to be made. Also, ensure that your "corrections" are in fact corrections. As for any errors that are made in any posts. Most people just type what they want to send and then hit the Post Reply button. This isn't an English class. There is nothing "official" about what we do in a SIMULATION LEAGUE!!!! It's all make believe stuff that we imagine happening because we are testosterone filled football freaks. My posts are rarely perfect (and if you look, I'm sure you'll find errors in this particular post...but I don't paticularly care.) |
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