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Post by Commodor on Dec 3, 2006 13:50:23 GMT -5
"If your going to insult people's grammar at least use correct grammar yourself...
FAG. "
1.Show "you are" with an apostrophe.
2."FAG" is a fragment.
3.When you use 3 or more periods, the next word is not capitalized.
4.There should be a comma in between "grammar" and "at".
5.When addressing one person, you should not use the plural form of "person".
Eat that Alex.
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Post by Director Of Fun!!!! on Dec 3, 2006 13:51:11 GMT -5
"If your going to insult people's grammar at least use correct grammar yourself... FAG. " 1.Show "you are" with an apostrophe. 2."FAG" is a fragment. 3.When you use 3 or more periods, the next word is not capitalized. 4.There should be a comma in between "grammar" and "at". 5.When addressing one person, you should not use the plural form of "person". wrong Kill yourself, emo. |
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Post by Commodor on Dec 3, 2006 13:52:15 GMT -5
Why? Are you angry because I actually made good points?
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Post by Director Of Fun!!!! on Dec 3, 2006 13:52:56 GMT -5
Why? Are you angry because I actually made good points? Not angry, just wishing you would kill yourself. EMO |
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Post by Jordan Allan on Dec 3, 2006 16:25:09 GMT -5
2. "FAG" was a continuation of the sentence, therefore it was not a fragment.
3. "FAG" was in all caps for emphasis, so the first letter does not have to be lower case.
5. He was talking about insulting people's grammar in general, not just a singular person.
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Post by Phenom on Dec 3, 2006 16:30:39 GMT -5
I think Alex Lewis should retire again.
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Post by Director Of Fun!!!! on Dec 3, 2006 16:37:12 GMT -5
I think Alex Lewis should retire again. Shouldn't you be joining another sim league about now? |
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