K I Dont Care, Lets Help Him

[travis]

OK Kris Since you have major grammar issues..Were going to proofread one paragraph of your writing. Take no offense I think its cool you got signed by a site. You do need to have proper grammer to write for websites though

Alright Smith, You Showed Something.

Alex Smith, I don't want to go praising you yet, but you obviously did better than you did last season already since you didn't throw no 1 TD and 9 INT's in about nine games. I will give you that much, however I will not give you the fact of an amazing change in pass accuracy. You ask why? This is only for the simple fact that Arizona's defense, pass defense that is, is not that great. To say the least, St.Louis is not that spectacular LAST SEASON, but they did force Jake Plummer to 3 INT's and a 50% pass completion with no touchdowns. He also just had 138 yards to go with it, and this is a player who had an amazing 7 interception season. Looks like that is going to end now dosen't it Jake?

Critique Away

[Tye Williams]

I turn my attention away from the piece and instead to Trav. Get a life.

[travis]

*checks* Has a great life! Always has enjoyed life to the fullest, doesnt take many things serious, passionate about his grades, passionate about enjoying every second god gives me.

Yup seems like me alright.